davidh, at 8:37PM on Mar 30, 2005
The composition isn't very balanced. You should take out the leaves on the bottom left, and perhaps play around with the scale of the other 'pointy star' leaves, perhaps spiral them out from the bottom right corner with that swirl design.

davidh, at 8:38PM on Mar 30, 2005
Ah, also try a different coloured shirt, maybe make the images a dark green on a lighter green shirt. I really like the idea, it would work really well with a bit more thought towards it's balance.

Yepsi, at 9:02PM on Mar 31, 2005
yeh i agree i only found out about the comp a few days ago and then didnt really have much time to do a good design, so i just slaped a few ideas together

davidh, at 11:39AM on Apr 1, 2005
THERES NOT MUCH TIME! QUICK! lol, it wouldn't take long to make those changes.

Yepsi, at 12:42PM on Apr 1, 2005
yeh i no to bad is to late now. or do i still have today? i will start working on it now.

smithy, at 2:10PM on Apr 1, 2005
Nice design, simple id really try to resubmit it aye, i think the deadline is 5pm today ?? I like how you've used a total original concept towards fly... hmm i couldnt think of that. Nice work man !

kelly, at 4:14PM on Apr 1, 2005
i like most of it. but i dont think the butterflies really fit in that well. i guess its to late for changes but otherwise its still cool. i like the butterflies part but maybe on there own.

Yepsi, at 3:44PM on Apr 6, 2005
yeh i no i couldnt get a remaid one submited in fast enough o well there is always next time. do u no if the theme for next comp is the same?

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